The
traditional medicine, for my opinion, is safer than the alternative medicine.
Traditional
medicine is very good because is safer, but has a problem, it is a lot more
expensive than alternative medicine because, obviously, all the subjects
that the traditional medicine has are related with machines that are
very expensive. And all the remedies are chemical products that are also very
expensive.
The
alternative medicine is very bad and it is an error to use it. Firstly, you can
consume drugs and get high, when you don’t want to get high. Also, you can eat
weird subjects that can be very awful for your stomach. And you can get ill.
My nation
has a different culture and we use the traditional medicine because we feel
safer with that medicine. We feel safer with that medicine because, we are
using that medicine for a very long time, and obviously if you are using a subject
for a long time, you will feel safer with that subject.
Other
cultures have the idea that the alternative medicine is better because for that
type of person, the animals or the nature are sacred. Like in India, most of
the animals in that place are sacred. And if you go to that place, you can’t
eat cow meat because it is sacred.
In conclusion,
I think that the traditional medicine is safer
than all the medicine that is in the world.
Francisco, some corrections to your work:
ResponderEliminarTraditional medicine, in my opinion, is safer than alternative medicine.
Traditional medicine is very good because it is safer, but has a problem, it is a lot more expensive than alternative medicine because, obviously, all the subjects that the traditional medicine has are related with machines that are very expensive. And all the remedies are chemical products that are also very expensive.
Alternative medicine is very bad and it is an error to use it. Firstly, you can consume drugs and get high, when you don’t want to get high. Also, you can eat weird subjects that can be very awful for your stomach. And you can get ill.
My nation has a different culture and we use traditional medicine because we feel safer with that medicine. We feel safer with that medicine because, we have been using that medicine for a very long time, and obviously if you are using something for a long time, you will feel safer with that.
Other cultures have the idea that alternative medicine is better because for that type of person, the animals or the nature are sacred. Like in India, most of the animals in that place are sacred. And if you go to that place, you can’t eat cow meat because it is sacred.
In conclusion, I think that traditional medicine is safer than all the medicine that is in the world.